If you have read any of my poetry, you know I am engaged in a project to transform the language into one that can facilitate a more accurate understanding and description of the world. Existing grammars not only constrain vision and understanding, they distort and tend to polarize reality. Thus my project.
It has had many names. It was first dubbed Stevespell by a friendly critic, at a time when the main thrust was to normalize English spelling. As it evolved and I began to focus on grammar and new modes of thinking and describing, I started calling it Stevetok. But more recently I am inclined to think of it as meta-English, and "standard" English as "old English."
Recently, as I began work on turning Bouk 3 of The Song ov Elmallahz Kumming into an ebook, I discovered that a couple of other authors had worked on the same underlying text, the Sumerian Nin-me-sar-ra text, that lies beneath my Bouk 3. One of those authors is Bill Sigler, who has written a notable re-translation.
We began a conversation, and I sent him links to my poem and some short essays on meta-English. What follows are some comments Bill made, which were very gratifying. I don't think anyone else has understood so clearly what I'm doing:
I appreciate the hat tip on your lucid yet wide-ranging linguistics
pieces. The poetics are intriguing, the idealism familiar. ... Still, call me weird, but I think "Blak Fiyer on Jennettek Fiyer"
explicates the whole thing so beautifully and perfectly, without trying
to patiently shine the pearls in the swine's ass. Your essays call to
mind a more sober Finnegan's Wake, but your poems are something else
entirely, like those filters that turn music into pure sound and break
up the hegemony of melody and harmony. In other words, because word
meanings are so intangible, the implications need to enigmatized for the
sake of the holy transportation away from mind into spirit through the
word. Few have been called for such work, fewer are chosen. I for one
honor that you've created and maintained this reality in the face of
Blakean odds. It does not need more justification, in my view, only more
time ( from me and others). I haven't had much chance to delve in much
yet, but nothing I've seen yet would discourage that. I will get to it
in my own way, and will undoubtedly report back. For now I'll just say
the Sumerian tree of life is on the edges of our existence, waiting to
be found...
Thanks Bill! You can find Bill's poetry and ideas at:
http://billsigler.blogspot.com/ and other sites (check his profile).
His translations of the Nin-me-sar-ra are at:
http://billsigler.blogspot.com/search?q=Nin-me-sar-ra
Sunday, February 23, 2014
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